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BJB_sanLv151yr
2023-09-14 23:22

Well then, this is a little new for me. I'm very surprised that with a book that hasn't even been properly released they're already locking chapters and requiring payment. Feels to me that they're jumping the gun quite a bit right there. I would have no problems paying for a good book which this book is almost there, but it has to be a properly released book and not something I'm just waiting on that might never come out. How about you get your book released first, then I'll think about giving you any of my resources that I have worked to collect or paid to acquire.

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BananaRanger69Lv14

if the book was not released in the end you would get refunded but if it was picked you will just have to take an l

HotOutsideLv5

yep, and paying for chapters adds to fan count, which (usually) matters in what gets picked for releasemost novels can be found elsewhere if you try too, tbf not always T/l tho

BananaRanger69:if the book was not released in the end you would get refunded but if it was picked you will just have to take an l
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