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TheWriter117
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With a gripping prologue, this story makes it way to get to the interesting parts although I dislike the story's emphasis on romance instead of delving deeply hard into characters' morality and ideology because that would be more thematically rich and complex. But that's just me. There are some pacing issues here and there but these are tolerable when the characters are so interesting to read. However despite my gripes with this one, Innocent Until Proven Guilty is a solid work that I would recommend.

Innocent Until Proven Guilty

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TheWriter117
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I'm just not all convinced with the character daydreaming of her rival crush while she's trying to beat him in court which just took me off. Instead of that, for me, maybe it's just better to just set up their ideology and morality first and explore it deeply why they are rivals and against each other then set up their romantic interest with one another later because this actually makes them look like real professionals that I can get behind.

slowestcook:For the record, how far did you read? I think some of your criticisms are explored more throughout the story, although possibly not to the depth you might be looking for. Obviously it’s listed as a contemporary romance, so that part is obvious 😉 but that runs parallel to the investigation. You’re right that someone not interested in any romance (albeit light) and looking for an investigation heavy story should probably look else where. This book strandles both. So future readers take note! Thank you for the review and recommendation! It is much appreciated. 🧡
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For the record, how far did you read? I think some of your criticisms are explored more throughout the story, although possibly not to the depth you might be looking for. Obviously it’s listed as a contemporary romance, so that part is obvious 😉 but that runs parallel to the investigation. You’re right that someone not interested in any romance (albeit light) and looking for an investigation heavy story should probably look else where. This book strandles both. So future readers take note! Thank you for the review and recommendation! It is much appreciated. 🧡