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SovereignSloth
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2023-07-14 11:19

The writing quality so far has been good little to no mistakes that I have found. The Story itself looks promising and I'm looking forwards to what the mc will do and how he will help shape the LOTM world.There are to few chapters to truly get the full understanding of the mc's goals and aspirations in his new life, but as of the current chapter (8) I like him.As far as I am concerned the release rate is good, but as always having more quicker is always a readers dream.The LOTM world is a GOAT of a place for any MC to land in and I'm sure the Author will do the world justice, and add more that will help flesh his story out better.Good Job Author. Don't Drop. Keep It Up.

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YunokRyuk
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Thank you so much for the review! I hope I can keep you engaged in this story!

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