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Chaos_Prime
Chaos_PrimeLv151yr
2023-07-21 20:49

In these few years I have known him, lightning was great in his life. He always wrote interesting things and from what I have seen of the first two chapters, this one will be even better.

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Texul
TexulLv3

First time reading a Novel with the premise of 'The behind the scene Plot Armor' of many choosen. The idea is really good, plot armor system is awesome. Stats are easy, simple and straight forward. It's not just a simple increment (as at now, not sure if it will get changed), but it's a qualitative change for every extra points, especially every 5 - 10 points. There are many "goods" in this book but only "bad", for me: That is the very very very slow pacing. Some words or sometimes get repeated a lot. Sometimes I see a couple of paragraphs from the ending of a chapter gets carried over to the next chapter. It's a novel, not tv show where there is "previously on.." If readers want, they can always review previous chapter. This unnecessary wordings also makes many of the chapter have little to no contents. We see explanations for everything which is nice, but the unnecessary prolonged expalnation is tiring, before we know, 2 chapters are gone with little progress. I dont know if I should add this to the "bads" but I feel like I should. There is absolutely no world background as of yet. Maybe little if we talk about the system. There are over 70+ chapter all inside a labyrinth, starting from the beginning ofthe book. Though, interesting but no knowledge about the world makes it too one dimensional. All we know is that earth has awakeners and gates, nothing else. The world background feels so plain. No matter how interesting fights are, character growth is, and so on, it's empty without a proper world background. The writing itself is really good, battle scene description is 👌. But we need more on the World Itself, not focused on just same thing constantly. My review is based on chapter 1 - 80

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