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Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv151yr
2023-09-13 07:56

Well written, Good Pacing after a bit of practice, well rounded harem and the author has a no one left behind attitude ( not that minor sperations don't happen sadly, but thats par for the course in harem ) plenty of good ol'Lemons, no Yandere's yet... sadly... but thats just a personal preference, all in all gets the head nod from me!

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DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthor

Thank you for the 5 stars and your head nod XD Very much appreciate it XD

Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

did u drop it man? i hope not, i was just about to come back and do a mass read

DaoistGreenOnion:Thank you for the 5 stars and your head nod XD Very much appreciate it XD
DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthor

Hello man! XD Sorry for the late reply, I am not dropping it. Just have been on a lengthy hiatus due to some very personal reasons. Will be gradually returning back. XD Thank you so much for remembering my novel! XD Would be happy to see you again! XD

Joethedeath:did u drop it man? i hope not, i was just about to come back and do a mass read
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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

One of the best dual cultivation stories on wn. I found it very early and after 60 chaps its time for a review. * Writing Quality - 10/10 without a doubt. It feels like the author is a veteran writer. Lack of info dumps, all the information you get are implemented into the story in a very smart way. *Story Development - the flow of the story is perfectly balanced, right amount of action mixed with character interactions. Author knows what parts of the story need more attention, and where to cut it shot with only important parts. You wont find here 4 chapters of pointless travel without any substance or importance to the plot. You dont event thing about the pacing, because if feels like it should be that way. *Character Design - when it comes to MC, he has a deep background with "real" personality. Not an egdy boy without feeling, but a human with countless years of knowledge. And yet he is lacking in some aspects, even after reincarnation his personality grows and he is not shy to admit that. Its a fresh feeling when a former God is fascinated by the behaviour of mortals. Harems members are just great, they dont feel like pokemons (im not gonna lie, I like pokemon hunting too馃槄), each of them have a personality, and a real one. Not the "I like swords" "I like flowers". They have goals in life, and I can only hope for mc to keep them close. I really dont like when harem members think of mc as a 10th priority in their life, and are more interested in other stuff. For the time being there is a nice romantic feel and I hope this will stay that way. Just like our mc, his girls have interesting background and eaxh of them feel different, not a copy with changed hair color. I m a self insert, so thats important hehe. *Update Stability - i cant say much when it comes to the future, but right now we have 3 chapters daily. Author said he has more time right now and it can change it the future. But for now its amazing, chapters and very long, without fillers just to reaxh the word numbers.*World Background - this is where this book really shines, you can see lots of work and thought where put into it. Small things like places, weather...Interesting ones like inner working of a sect. Thats the first time I was really intersted how a proper sect works, what happens to the disciples after thier potential ends. There is a reason for almost everything, with a great and logical explanation. When you read it, it makes sense. There is only 60 chapters and im really hyped to know more about the world and the secrets it holds. *Lemons - its a dual cultivation book, lets face it fellow daoist, you are here for some spice. And ohh boy, the author delivers! From romantic, vanilla scenes (I cant belive i like them so much, there is one scene in the bathroom where one of his girl just dress up and man, you can see it in your mind...). Mc had a broken sword and got it fixed not long ago, so there is not a lot of "proper" cultivation (remember chap 60) but if I can read judge by what I got to this point...future looks even more amazing. Not a lot of author can write a detailed lemons with that feeling...you will find some scenes with only "pats" as author calls them, its fire! I read lots of harems, and belive me, its that good. I think I covered all of it, give it a chance guys - its worth it! A cultured daoist like me dont lie when it comes to important business... Important notes: NO NTR NO YURI All of it its in the synopsis, but lots of people dont read it 馃榿.Thank you Green Onion for this amazing book, and if your next novel wont have winc est i ll curse you and your pp will fall off! Give me a hot mommy and sis *cough* *cough* i mean a friend asked...馃槑

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