It's only 4 chapters but I liked it. Hope the protagonist doesn't make the usual mistakes of every Iskied character in Marvel.
Torhelm
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LIKECiar_Achlys:Well, one of the main is playing gotta catch 'em All on Girls. Also, there are stupid moves, where he could use a simple skill to defeat the enemy but instead use the most useless incompetent skill. There's also sudden regression of mentality like a 30-year-old sane man acts like a child
they also forget about important events, they have one of the most cheat like ability' their knowledge about the future (if used well) but the authors always force plot (if done well and subtly it won't be a problem) and make things complicated just because they can't imagine better scenarios
Ciar_Achlys:Well, one of the main is playing gotta catch 'em All on Girls. Also, there are stupid moves, where he could use a simple skill to defeat the enemy but instead use the most useless incompetent skill. There's also sudden regression of mentality like a 30-year-old sane man acts like a child