So let begin the review.My first impression of the tittle and synopsis is the general route of any dxd fanfic that often has many dumb and barely functioning plot when they put OP character of other franchise/story or something similiar and then goes straight to play pokemeon with all of women in dxd. Not really good first impression, I know but oh boy you blew my mind with how you narate the introduction of the 72 pillar of devil Second, while I still don't really know how Goetia in the fate universe behave and origin story, I have good feeling that you done his character justice in this fanfic. The allure of ancient and some what malicious being is really attached and I feel he really is the perfect last villain that dxd main cast would end battle with.Third, The way you narate the story is rather refreshing to me as you put your focus in world building and lay out the present trouble of the plot in clear manner yet still maintained the mystery is such good way to made the reader want to continue read just to know the continuity of the story.Fourth, I hope you would continue this book to it's end.Note: Sorry with long review here have cookie
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please tell me this is not harem ( I've been searching for a non harem dxd fic for ages, and since this fic doesn't have the harem tag, I'm slightly hopeful)
As far the story goes right now there no Harem or even romance in the story. At most it just platonic/bussines type relationship with Ophis. And what you hope in anime that famous for it fan service?
goetia is not a villain he just wants to destroy humanity because he pity humans and wants to make them immortal. plus goetia is too overpowered for dxd fic , since there is no chladea he goes into past destroy earth and be done with it
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