Review Detail of LuRai in Darling CEO I'll marry you: His wife is a nightingale

Writing quality: Overall your verbiage isn't bad at all. You have an excellent understanding of language and how to structure sentences. That being said you add a little too many details, some things can be omitted and restructured so the sentences aren't repetitive and lengthy. In the first chapters, the song lyrics try to use '' around the lyrics to separate them from the non-dialogue parts. You can also split the lengthy paragraphs, and shorten some detailing as well :) Story development and Characters: I love the character's personalities and names, almost like a webtoon. Loving the plotline and looking forward to many many updates Overall great work!!!