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FlorestLife
FlorestLifeLv41yr
2023-07-09 22:26

The first story with a background of Jujutsu Kaisen that I read. I like the character development, you're doing a good job and I hope it stays that way. I hope the protagonist becomes a powerful user. I like the fantasy world.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

Yesnth
4.4
57 Chs

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AccaHowler
AccaHowlerLv4

please don't make it harem ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎

1yr

KyoXIzu
KyoXIzuLv4

Keep it up my friend, this is one of the best jjk fics I’v read in the app and has the potential to be the best. GOOD LUCK!!

1yr
AlexCyberHeart
AlexCyberHeartLv2

mc is trades potential for to be stronger for instant power up when he doesn't need to

1yr
_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

too much explanation is too little history😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😑😑😑😑😒😒😑😒😑😑😑😑😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😑😑😑😑😒😒😑😒😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😑😑😑😑😒😒😑😒😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

1yr
094710440
094710440Lv2

The Mc in the span of 3 months goes from the weakest amount of energy to special grade. Then after people tried to kill him he instead gave them and their boss his protection and made a way to teach them sorcery wouldn’t recommend if you don’t like a hero Mc. Also the update stability is horrendous. And the pacing is extremely slow Mc hasn’t even interacted with any of the cast.

5mth
Poke_verse
Poke_verseLv2

My compliments to the author, he knows his stuff. The worldbuilding actually makes sense, the characters are written well and the MC is understandable and likeable.

7mth
Leegeeon81
Leegeeon81Lv1

Any updates? Its 2 months Already, i hope the author is Healthy again, please, i really like the fanfiction story of Jujutsu kaisen please recover soon, and upload again, please don't rashly upload it, make it good like always

1yr
Mr_n
Mr_nLv3

give as more chapters

10mth
CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

The grammar in the story is good I couldn't find any mistakes. The MC interactions and actions feels exactly how a 15 year old kid would. Unfortunately, this here is a reincarnated person who should be more grounded, not make rash decisions and have a more stable personality... Which unfortunately he doesn't have. Also, there are too many inconsistencies. With the author, sometimes saying "having 1,000 points in cursed energy control is very impressive among other Jujutsu users", but later that chapter saying his "energy control is way too awkward and have a lot to improve". Listing Gojo and Geto as special grade while they're still in tech school... Anyway there are a lot of inconsistencies that gave me an headache. To sum it up I would say the idea was good but the execution was poor. Writing quality: 5 Updating stability: 2 Story development: 3 Character design: 1 World background: 5

5mth
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