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2023-07-21 16:19

A bold premise with a decent execution. The novel is fast paced enough to keep you on tenterhooks throughtout every chapter. It definitely wouldn't hurt anyone to read through half a dozen chapters and see if they vibe with it. It's good stuff in the genre. There are some oversights with punctuation, dialogue formatting and capitalization, but they can be glossed over by the average reader. Things I can't gloss over, though perhaps may be explored later, is the character inconsistency. The hatred is meant to be palpable, but all I see is tsundere energy. On the male side, he seems to have awfully low self-esteem, despite being a god in man's skin. While it is a novel, those rather unrealistic back and forth flops threw me off. Overall, it is decent read. For fans of the modern romance / marriage genre, it's 100% worth a click. It's not my cup of tea, but even I don't regret reading it. Good luck on the contest.

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