Review Detail of JustToMeme in Time's Awakening: The Rebirth of a Passion

Time's Awakening: The Rebirth of a Passion" is a captivating tale of self-discovery, redemption, and the power of one's indomitable spirit. As our protagonist navigates the world of basketball, he not only hones his skills but also learns profound lessons about himself and the true meaning of pursuing one's passion. Our mc Yūsuke "Yū" Takahashi is a stoic person and he replies in minimal words. I know where the stories will go but I would like to see an honest review and ideas to improve what needs to be improved of my amateur novel.