Review Detail of BrizZl in Trapped In The Game Of Souls

Writing this Review With only five chapters of this story published. I'm enjoying it so far. The writing is well-done, and the story is well-paced. The MC are interesting, and I'm invested in his journey. However, I do find some of the chapters to be a bit long-winded. There are times when I feel like the author could have trimmed the fat and gotten to the point a bit quicker. Overall, I'm still enjoying the story, and I'm looking forward to reading more. Don't stop writing! I'm eager to see where this story goes. :]~