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2024-10-28 07:39

Can't believe I never dropped a review. I saw this in the recommended, came for the FP but stayed for Kestrel's character development. I really like Kestrel. She is a complex individual and her tendrils have so much character. This is not the typical omegaverse that I am familiar with, but the story was so enjoyable! Big Fish is super cute 💕

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TheSaltedFish
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This is a gem. Amazingly well written and not what I expected at all when reading the description, in a good way. I saw it was on the daily free books, read the description and thought it was going to be another mindless, easy read about Alphas (wolves usually 😅) but this was nothing like that. I've read to chapter 140ish (very sleep deprived thanks to this 😂) and this book has so much depth, the characters are amazing. especially love the FL & ML (did a happy dance when the ml WASNT a cold, dominant CEO type who's always stronger than FL in every way 🤦🏻‍♀️). I adore them so much and the FL's 'little friends', so precious. 😭The story and world itself have kept me completely hooked, always wanting to know what happens next. honestly I can't recommend this story enough, its a breath of fresh air compared to the copy and paste stories on here. my only very, very minor gripe would be how much the author uses the word 'super' a lot. It kept throwing me out of the story. Like, 'it was super dark', 'she was super strong'. sometimes several times in a paragraph and from character POV's that really didn't suit that word in my opinion. Considering everything else was so well written, the use of that word seemed out of place. 😅 but maybe it's because I hear that word from kids more than anything and thought it juvenile, so it's possibly just my own preference. anyway, love this story! I'm so glad it came up on the daily free books or i may have completely missed out on this gem. definitely gonna save coins and read the rest. thank you author! 😊

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