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TheWitcher
TheWitcherLv141yr
2024-01-09 17:52

What I liked about this novel is the quality of its writing, such generous vocabulary making the read enjoyable and enticing. The story development is exciting and provides lots of anticipation. Likewise, the world background is very well described and there is clear picture about how the apocalypse ended that way. The only thing I am mostly off about are the characters and their personalities. I apologize but I am not a fan of immature characters. I completely lost it after the introduction of the Oracle lady and her interactions with the protagonist and his allies. Some of the characters such as Colin has a tendency to be immature but maybe that just how the writer wants him to be. I would love to further my reading as I really love how the author does a very articulate novel but I suppose my taste for this type of novel is washout. This is just my sincere opinion and I hope other readers will find it different from me. All the best!

Chef in the Apocalypse

leeroycgna
4.3
305 Chs

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leeroycgna
leeroycgnaAuthor

Thanks for your honest review. I myself am a bit immature, which is probably why I project these things onto the characters with my childish humor.Thanks for taking the time. If you want some deeper emotional story feel free to read my other book Major League System.

1yr
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leeroycgna
leeroycgnaAuthor

We're almost at 100ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have. Firstly, this is my second contracted book on the platform, however I have paused my other book to focus solely on Chef in the Apocalypse so please do not worry about me dropping this. The story will follow Jayce who has regressed after spending 10 years in the Apocalypse. After dying, he returns to the release date of the game Cataclysm: World's End, which is 3 months before it descends upon Earth and causes the Apocalypse. The MC is not omnipotent and all-knowing, he is in fact quite flawed. However, he is loyal and determined while also being intelligent. He values his friends greatly and aims to survive whilst protecting them and growing stronger together. While the story begins as a tale of survival, with no explanation about the Apocalypse's origins or cause, it will begin to be discovered in the future. If you like a character-driven plot filled LitRPG, then this is the book for you. If you have any questions, please feel free to reply to the review and I will answer as soon as I can. For now, here are some FAQ's (please avoid spoilers) FAQ: Q: Will there be Romance? A: Yes, wholesome Romance is a cornerstone of a great fantasy book. However like all things, it takes time. Q: Harem? A: No.

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Idczhen
IdczhenLv14

Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some confusion in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.

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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance ? Wanted to know if there will be romance ?

1yr
Pragmatico
PragmaticoLv15

Read what was free for a reference point: I like the idea and general plot of the story so this far, but the story does progress at a slow pace. If you want fast pace this isn’t the one for you. The grammar is good especially for a story on this app. Updates seem stable bit it’s a new book and the writer has another story the are working on as well; so we will see. World background needs a lot of building in my opinion. We will not know MC is in Asia and that’s it. We also know very little about MCs personality and background. Wish the characters were fleshed out more in the free chapters to connect with them and make them unique. Good luck with this story

1yr
lucifer_2805
lucifer_2805Lv4

I'm bad at writing reviews but I'll just write whatever comes to my mindFirst of all, the writing quality is excellent, it feels like I'm reading a veteran's book.Update : Author already uploading 15 ch/week, what more do you want.I like the MCs personality and even better as he doesn't know the apocalypse like the back of his hand, so it creates suspense, I like that.and lastly, the reason I decided to give this book a try,THE MCS A COOK!!LOTS OF FOODGood going Author-san

1yr
Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_KotikLv5

you know it gives me a bit of satisfaction that after all those deleted reviews you still couldn't escape the garbage you did later on. you could silence the dissenters but your story died regardless

4mth
baalnana
baalnanaLv2

The prose is undeniably captivating, drawing the reader into the narrative effortlessly. However, I must admit that the pacing feels a tad leisurely for my taste, and I would personally appreciate more intricately detailed fight scenes to heighten the excitement and intensity.Nonetheless, the story shows great promise, and I understand that it's still in its early stages. As they say, you can't fully judge a book until you've read it in its entirety. Despite my minor reservations, I genuinely believe it holds the potential to be a compelling read that's well worth exploring further.

1yr
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
BurningSky
BurningSkyLv12

I dont know where you got the ingredients in an apocalypse world.. i hope that there would be a supporting class or someone with a subclass like a FARMER to get these ingredients. I hope that the chapters are longer. sometimes its like a minute or two passed in the novel like MC thinking what to do.. almost like info dump.. if there is action, too detailed enough to finish the chapter.. i dont mind a time skip as long as its longer

1yr
TheEpic_Gamer
TheEpic_GamerLv12

Great story so far I like the whole dynamic his group has right now idk how I feel about romance this soon but still a great read

1yr
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