From the get-go, the story grabbed my attention. The way the author weaves the narrative is genuinely commendable. However, I believe there's room for improvement. Perhaps if the story progressed at a slightly quicker pace and delved deeper into action-packed scenes, it could become even more immersive for readers like me. I'm genuinely excited and curious to see how the story will head. Lastly, I hope the author can maintain a more consistent update schedule.
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