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Qilinblood
QilinbloodLv31yr
2023-07-09 18:23

As I normally don't read much of the novel where there is a female-lead but this one is quite a catch. The progress as how the story develops is quite good and all the minor details are also given. I would recommend that readers give it a read. This is for the Author-------> Speaking from as how I read it the parts where you have written the acts or scenarios and some paras also, they are a bit too big, which as a result causes one to skip the info you want to provide to a reader so I hope you improve, but still till the 8 Ch's I read they are quite good and also waiting for more updates

The Majesty And The Red Dragon

redlady
4.8
24 Chs

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redlady
redladyAuthor

I will fraction the paragraphs .. Thank you !

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Mauricio_Medina_1306
Mauricio_Medina_1306Lv4

i am very please and love every page of these novels

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SalomeTadala
SalomeTadalaLv1

As a hardcore fan of this author, I’m always going to have to give 5 stars. I mean, obviously the author put so much heart into it, and it’s just so great to have another novel to absolutely GEEK over—! Literally love the author, hope you all enjoy this as much as I did! Much love, S.T <3

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LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesLv3

Read the first 5 chapters and I love it. The pacing is well done while the description is top notch. Looks like web novel writers are finally focusing on descriptions. I love the dynamic between Illona and Anise. Also, I laugh when Illona compares her body with Anise. Overall, the novel is perfect as it is. Also, I love how strong Illona is instead of being a damsel in distress.

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ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv4

Okay...if you ask me...This story took me to my naïve and innocent youth....when I used to read and dream of adventures in the wonderful world created by the books!! I find a touch of fair tale, adventure of Robin Hood, King Arthur, and many other classic fantasy tales. Amazing...I would love to see this novel succeed. Readers...Just start reading..and thank me later.

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IvanelaSalove
IvanelaSaloveLv11

First, good luck with the WPC Contest! Second, the synopsis could use a little improvement. Maybe use a descriptive form instead of the conversation as it hooks the readers more (personal opinion), but it's just a suggestion as it kinda feels off when I read it from the description of the novel. Usually, I read it in the novel's prologue to add more hook or mystery. Lastly, the plot itself is interesting because I can already feel that it's quite spicy (lol) so I will definitely read more once it's updated. Overall, this novel has potential and I'm looking forward to its development [img=strong]

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redlady
redladyAuthor

I swear this is the last time I change the cover ! LOL ! How you like that ? Da da da , da da da , da .....(Just blackpink reverie) ! I am curious ... don't keep me waiting to much !

1yr
GMSJakers
GMSJakersLv1

The book is supported by an engaging plot with descriptive descriptions that help make the story shine in a beaming way. It's a book with potential.

1yr
_Haven
_HavenLv12

What a compelling story! Ilona is such an admirable character taking care of Anise, and I’m loving the adorable/comedic relationship she has with her! The characters’ personalities are lively and captivating, fulfilling readers’ expectations. I’m so excited for the adventure in this story! Great job, author!

1yr
redlady
redladyAuthor

What do you think about the new cover ? I tried using pixai , and this is the most similar image with what I head in mind excluding the fact that I wanted the shirt to cover her breasts more.But I guess you wouldn't complain about it .

1yr
Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcLv4

Good read so far. Characters looks lively and well written. Looking forward to read more.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
Lo_rezi00
Lo_rezi00Lv2

we got a strong female lead here😁so I wouldn't want to say much but author your work is mind blowingI love the way u detailed everything out pls keep the flag flying ❣️

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