Review Detail of Chaos_Prime in Frustrating novel

First one was deleted because I did not read past first chapter. First of all: the synopsis is good. It is interesting and captivating. Some highlights are: 1) earth -> Earth 2) it reads like a mouthful and breaking some of it into smaller chunks could help. The tags are ok, but they feel like an indication of a comedy and this also appears in the synopsis. However, the first chapter does not convey this. The first chapter is good, some spelling errors are there, like Ashuras instead of Asuras. there is also a confusing part. At the start of describing the MC, it says that he is red from all the battles so, it is most likely due to blood. Then, though, it says that his skin is red and white, so it feels confusing. Probably specificng one or elaborating more or even removing one of them can help. The start of the motivational speech was good, yet it quickly deteriorated to a full-on info dump. This put a dampener on things. The MC seemed interesting, however, he fails as a commander and a leader. In the first chapter, he spilled too much unnecessary info and even said that they will lose. That’s not what a good commander will do. The second chapter onwards needs a lot of work. the chapters feel disastrous. The tense change is annoying. Tbh, I had some bias because I like gory-seeming starts, but this is more objective now.