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Yondy
YondyLv311mth
2024-06-01 20:08

I really enjoyed this. The continual switch of pov makes the story complex yet simple at the same time Reading from each perspective builds the characters profoundly. A great read can't wait for the next chapter.

barely attached by fate

mahe_ale_aba
4.7
29 Chs

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ATOMIC_MOON
ATOMIC_MOONLv3

I find the story very touching and appreciate the author's portrayal of the character. The way the chapters end, leaving you with a sense of curiosity and a desire to know what will happen next, is indeed an excellent storytelling technique. It creates anticipation and keeps the reader engaged. Keep up. The good work there is some punctuation mistake but they can be fixed.

1yr

IvanelaSalove
IvanelaSaloveLv11

I can say that the synopsis hooked me from the start, but I find it lengthy to read, so it needs to be divided into paragraphs. In that way, readers would have the 'feel' for it. Now for the novel's content, there are a few grammar mistakes in the dialogues, but the story development makes up for that. I love a good contemporary romance especially when the author gives a spice into it like it's not a typical trope. Keep it up, author-nim!

1yr
MooingNymph
MooingNymphLv4

Nothing to say other than it's a great book and that you should just keep doing what you're doing!

1yr
Sorcha_1111
Sorcha_1111Lv10

I would not lie, I really love this book. I have always been picky with the type of books I read but this is truly great and even the grammar is outstanding 🥰🥰. I really appreciate the writer. keep up the good work 💪🩷🩷.

11mth
DaoistthV4aQ
DaoistthV4aQLv1

Amazing! In the first chapter i had the Mafia romance vibes, but as the story paced it also put Emotions like Sadness and pity for Characters. Keep it up, and there are a few mistakes in Punctuation and Dialogues. You can fix them just by giving them a re-read

1yr
ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSkyLv3

So I’m not really a fan of romance novels but I do like some romance in my novels but this pulls it off quite well there’s nothing really wrong with it but I’m not a big fan of romance but the emotional aspects of the story are so heavy it sometimes leaves you stunned I would recommend this if you like romance and some tragedy. I realize that it’s good but it’s just not my cup of tea.

1yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

The beginning was a bit tragic but it's good thing we knew what leads her to enter the dark world. Other than that, the punctuation needs to be fixed as they're some missing in the dialogues. And, I'm curious, why do you keep using the ';' symbol?

1yr
Danespl
DanesplLv3

Golden 🪙, Keep up the good work. I do love if you could shorten the chapters though

9mth
Lil_rexon
Lil_rexonLv3

I love how the writer portrays the characters and hooks each chapter with suspense. It has a refreshing setting and the concept is great. Curious about the future of this novel.

10mth
pantserplotter
pantserplotterLv3

The storytelling is already that good and I and sinked in to the storyline. The grammar is standard and prose is fine. I must say I learned a lot as a reader and writer at the same time with the work of the author. Loved your work and don't drop. 😊

11mth
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