Review Detail of Trial_of_Humanity in Strongest Heir of The Fallen Gods
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Writing style is terrible, grammar is even worse. Half of the dialogues don't even feel real, and we know almost nothing of what this world is about other than the 2 or 3 paragraphs summary left in the first chapters.Only good point here is the update stability.It doesn't deserve any higher rating unless the author fixes his writing style.
Strongest Heir of The Fallen Gods
Unsoph
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it is not that bad...or are you deliberately giving it a bad reputation? I have read 4 chapters as it came up top on the list... Anyway, if you are looking for a CLASSIC writing style this platform is not for you. Authors work hard. If you want them to improve, point out where exactly is the problem instead of talking in general.
The author is a friend of mine who outright asked me and others to rate his work. We explicitedly said we won't hold back, and so we didn't. I'm not saying this is the worst thing I've read, I've seen worse stuff than thid before reviewing Unsoph's novel, but it certainly isn't at a level I'd call "my standard". The rating of 3 stars isn't there because I want to lower his rating, but because it is worth 3 stars in my opinion, using WN's rating system.
ToufiqUlAlam:it is not that bad...or are you deliberately giving it a bad reputation? I have read 4 chapters as it came up top on the list... Anyway, if you are looking for a CLASSIC writing style this platform is not for you. Authors work hard. If you want them to improve, point out where exactly is the problem instead of talking in general.
I don't mind as my friend above said, I asked for a genuine review from them on my novel. I certainly agree with many of the points they have said and it is, in a nutshell, a waking call? yea that. There standards could be somewhat high but that means I have just that much scope to improve. So no need to worry bout it lol. I am happy that you came forward to address it, it just means that I got that good of a reader!
ToufiqUlAlam:it is not that bad...or are you deliberately giving it a bad reputation? I have read 4 chapters as it came up top on the list... Anyway, if you are looking for a CLASSIC writing style this platform is not for you. Authors work hard. If you want them to improve, point out where exactly is the problem instead of talking in general.
Unsoph:I don't mind as my friend above said, I asked for a genuine review from them on my novel. I certainly agree with many of the points they have said and it is, in a nutshell, a waking call? yea that. There standards could be somewhat high but that means I have just that much scope to improve. So no need to worry bout it lol. I am happy that you came forward to address it, it just means that I got that good of a reader!