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2024-04-11 17:33

This story is fairly good. The storyline is pretty engaging and the changes you're anxious for happen pretty quickly but the further the story goes, there are some important aspects that become very dissatisfying. One: being able to read her thoughts become sporadic and there's no rhyme or reason to when it shows up and when it doesn't. Second: The FL has mysterious people and some less powerful people scheming against her, and while she seems smart and insightful at first, further into the story, she seems to be drifting in her abilities and intelligence with vague, unspecified plans to resolve the situations, but she does nothing and accomplishes nothing to counteract her enemies, and Third: the worst part is I'm at chapter 350+ and there's NO romance, the ML is still unclear, and the person who seems to be the ML has barely shown up and had very little interaction with the FL with practically non-existent relationship building between them. I'll probably stop reading this book. Will there even be a romantic relationship showing by chapter 500 at this rate?!!

Book Transmigration: I Wanted to Keep a Low Profile, but Everyone Noticed Me!

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