First of all, I loved how the writing at some points felt like the MC was writing a letter to her friend or her personal diary. It really gave more depth and feeling to the story because it made the protagonist more relatable! By reading her thoughts, we got to know her better and understood her struggles more deeply. There is definitely an element of mystery going on and it keeps the reader engaged/interested in finding out what will happen next. The new world really seemed magical and fascinating from the first descriptions, so I look forward to seeing how far the world-building will go. You're doing a great job, keep it up!
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