so the Story is Not so easy To understand He dosent have a clear Goal and that you discrib a Past act from the mother son and daugther in 3 different pov IS To much maby only one pov you are streching this verry much and ther are Just To many mysteries I m only at chapter 13 and i löst my ability To comprahend the Story and maybe indroduc a Power system in the beginig this would be easier To follow the Story
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