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Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv412mth
2023-12-31 02:22

honestly, i would say, i absolutely loved the novel before that lady Freya was introduced. apparently, from reading another review she is alive even at chapter 80 that's way beyond my patience point.so what happens is that MC killed family of this woman then he gives her a fruit because she wanna kill MC and is quite determined to do it. MC gives her a lot of his own vitality to save her according to MC as much as 25 grown men. i don't get the reason at all if MC wanted strong opponents he can find many everywhere and it's not even like he is unaware of strong opponents that's the first thing he saw how strong some humans are. so if it doesn't bother you that MC Carry around with him a woman who wants him dead at all cost then maybe you could read it otherwise i don't recommend it at all.

One Piece: Chaos Kong

Ozonelayer
3.9
450 Chs

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Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv4

also this lady gains a succubus fruit so she is a wh*re and author is not afraid of describing her do it so there is also that to look out for ...

8mth
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RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Wait what ?

Ashir_Ahmad:also this lady gains a succubus fruit so she is a wh*re and author is not afraid of describing her do it so there is also that to look out for ...
1mth
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Thank you.

1mth
Other Reviews
QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcasticLv4

Writing Quality: Amazing, almost no errors or typos, and it reads fluently. 5/5 -- Updates: Pretty quick considering the length of the chapters, -/- -- Story Development: Here's where personal preference comes in, or why I rate it slightly lower than I usually would. The start was amazing, no doubt about it. Still, the story direction was affected by what the MC was turning into, perhaps to a very high degree, which derailed much of its potential toward a full villain-sided story. 3/5 from me, sorry. --- Character Design: In all honesty, the MC's personality is what made this story.... not something I looked forward to reading once I saw there was an update. It singlehandedly destroyed my interest to see him grow, become stronger, and thrive in the danger he exposed himself to. It all turned the MC into some kind of second-rate murderhobo whenever possible. I do understand how you wrote the character, I truly do, but when at every turn things are resolved with slaughter and mayhem and chaos, it quickly turns stale. (This is only my personal view.) --- World Background: One-Piece world, what more do I have to say. --- Overall: Great, but not my cup of tea. Highly recommend people to at least check it out and make their own opinions.

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Anthiaris
AnthiarisLv15

Absolute masterpiece, not wanting to spoil but don't get caught up with the average reviews of people who just red the 15 first chapters, it is a very well written story, like every other work by this author. This is a story about a non-human MC, a battle junkie through and through with an astonishing talent for battle and martials arts. The pace of the story is really good and the MC is in no way completely broken OP or whatever at 15 yo like way too much One Piece fanfics. He gains strenght like you could expect him to regarding his training, doesn't get to tussle with Admirals at the beginning and most importantly doesn't steamroll the whole canon story by being Yonko commander level at chapter 15.

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Lord_Cynrik
Lord_CynrikLv4

If you don’t mind an MC that is lowkey evil, then this fanfic is amazing. Writing quality is god tier by webnovel standards, and the story is very good, side characters are almost all OC’s but they’re very likable and well done, and we’re starting to see more and more canon characters as the MC rises in fame and power. Updates are very frequent, and I really have no complaints. Just know that the mc doesnt mind slaughtering islands lol

10mth
C_K_3132
C_K_3132Lv14

You took an interesting fighting maniac, and made him into a cold blooded murderer. Ruined it. Being psycho is fine, but murdering innocent civilians and children? No.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

MC with his senseless killing really brought down any good thing about this fanfic. I don't mind MC's killing enemies, but he even killed the ones who saved him.

1yr
Ryan_42
Ryan_42Lv14

Liked it till about chapter 20, and then the author decides to do some weird stuff. Give it a try though, it's petty interesting. The author does a great job of further building on the One Piece world.

1yr
ethan_martineau
ethan_martineauLv3

what garbage this fan fic is was good until chapter 20 and some bofore thats why even give that lady a devil fruit then she dose r 18 thing so im dropping this aslo you shold add a r 18 tag so people who dont like that suff wont read it. aslo iknow i made so many spelling mistakes

1yr
KGM
KGMLv13

Certified OzoneLayer classic. Can’t say much because it was literally just released but so far its been good.

1yr
GodOfPride_z
GodOfPride_zLv3

Very good beginning, it really caught my attention, I liked the quality of writing, it is one of the best beginnings I have read. But, from chapter 20 or so, at the moment the girl takes the devil fruit, Everything goes downhill, the simple scene that happens after the fight in the gym leaves me with a feeling of disgust, simply incredible.Fast forward a few chapters, around 50 or 80 I think? Where Diddy gives her vitality to save her in a fight, and apparently you want her to be her partner, honestly ruined the story in my opinion.Obviously they are my tastes, there must be people who liked the story, simply giving my opinion, I really like your ff, I'm reading the new one in fact, this one is simply not to my taste.Good luck (Google Translate)

1yr
ty_spencer
ty_spencerLv15

Ngl been named Diddy.D is crazy work in 2024

3mth
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