Review Detail of M_Loe in Son of Muzan

Ur writing wrong, ur telling not speaking, This is an example here. Example: As Muzak glanced at this pregnant woman, he felt a familiar feeling, He chucked with laughter “ A Child you say!?” He’s red eyes brightened up. ‘Well that’s unexpected, Hmm’ Not the best but you got the idea, ur using pov as a summary, which I honestly cringed, But this could be better.