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Plot is well paced. Great writing quality. pretty good character creation, Though updates are pretty bad right now and we could only hope the author keeps pumping out some chaps. World background i pretty well explained so no problems there.

Great fanfic and idea. Keep it up!!!!!!!!

I randomly felt like rating my own story, now that it have around 40 chapters I believe I can give a more objective review. writing quality: 5/5while I think it might be an overstatement since some mistakes might slip from me when I edit the chapters, I still think the writing quality have been improving steadily throughout the chapters. story development: 5/5it might feel a little slow, a whole arc being dedicated to his life before blue lock, but I believe it gives readers a way better idea of his personality, and it also introduce his strength and weaknesses perfectly. character design: 5/5I enjoy all of my OCs and I think they all have their own personality and place in the world. I also believe I portrayed the characters we already know as accurately as possible. updating stability: 5/5I'm aware this is the worst point, the only reason I'm giving it a 5/5 is because I think it's the best I can currently do, my irl life leaving me with very little time to write. world background: 5/5as I said, a whole arc was dedicated to his life in Spain, and that in itself developed the world background way more than I could've hoped.

спасибо за все и пожалуйста продолжайте историю :} :}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

Best Blue Lock fanfic that I have ever read. Great MC, amazing tension, cocky characters like in original manga, Overall 5/5, I recommend it to read to every Blue Lock fan. Mate, please drop 3-4 chapter at one day, we have already waited too long)))

Одна из лучшей истории по блю лок, которые я читал. Мне особенно понравилась предстояния. Я когда читал вообще не задумывался, что это фанфик. Это полноценный роман. Особенно мне нравится предыстория и развитие. И по ходу будет глав 200-300. Очень нравится.

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it is the best blue lock fanfic I have ever read