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It's really well written. Not much, if any, grammatical errors. I put a 4 on character design because the acceptance of polyamory/harem was forced(?) or not explained. It just kinda happened. I'm gonna chalk it up to insecurities that the women have been shown to have and the fact that it doesn't seem like they've put labels on the relationship. Keep up the good work.

Chef's Harem in Multiverse

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Thank you.

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Xcalibur_XcAuthorXcalibur_Xc

I will soon explain that poly part in vol2.👍