An enjoyable read so far. Good character development. The side characters seem nice and good. The segs are ahem! too good and well written. Grammer is alright, I don't think I saw any problems with the writing style. Thank you. Keep it up.
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Chal, fake id fake id chillaraha hai, chal fake id hai, tera baap ka kya jata hai? Tere baap ka id hai? huh? Banchod. Oops, tere to hazar baap hai, considering ke to ek gali ke randi ke alut hai. Lawra, jab har jata hai sala, tab sab fake id ban jata hai. Pandu sala.
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