An enjoyable read so far. Good character development. The side characters seem nice and good. The segs are ahem! too good and well written. Grammer is alright, I don't think I saw any problems with the writing style. Thank you. Keep it up.
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LIKETeri maa ki chut..Teri Gand me ghusenge terrorist organisation...aur rape karega Teri maa ko..ab toh Teri Gand hi marunga milega toh .sadap chap tharki madarchod bhikari ...tharki hilata he koi v ladki dekh ke..teri aukat kya he ..aa madarchod Mera toilet v saf karle..tu toilet hi sirf saf kar paegam.teri aukat tatti saf karne ki
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Chal, fake id fake id chillaraha hai, chal fake id hai, tera baap ka kya jata hai? Tere baap ka id hai? huh? Banchod. Oops, tere to hazar baap hai, considering ke to ek gali ke randi ke alut hai. Lawra, jab har jata hai sala, tab sab fake id ban jata hai. Pandu sala.
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Dxr_Xrd:Chal, fake id fake id chillaraha hai, chal fake id hai, tera baap ka kya jata hai? Tere baap ka id hai? huh? Banchod. Oops, tere to hazar baap hai, considering ke to ek gali ke randi ke alut hai. Lawra, jab har jata hai sala, tab sab fake id ban jata hai. Pandu sala.