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Dxr_Xrd
Dxr_XrdLv21yr
2023-08-19 22:15

An enjoyable read so far. Good character development. The side characters seem nice and good. The segs are ahem! too good and well written. Grammer is alright, I don't think I saw any problems with the writing style. Thank you. Keep it up.

Chef's Harem in Multiverse

Xcalibur_Xc
4.6
165 Chs

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Obvlion
ObvlionLv2

Han madarchod apni fake id se apni tharki book ki review kar behenchodd itna gawar he Khali betha he madarchod.

7mth
Dxr_Xrd
Dxr_XrdLv2

Chal, fake id fake id chillaraha hai, chal fake id hai, tera baap ka kya jata hai? Tere baap ka id hai? huh? Banchod. Oops, tere to hazar baap hai, considering ke to ek gali ke randi ke alut hai. Lawra, jab har jata hai sala, tab sab fake id ban jata hai. Pandu sala.

Obvlion:Han madarchod apni fake id se apni tharki book ki review kar behenchodd itna gawar he Khali betha he madarchod.
7mth
Obvlion
ObvlionLv2

Tu madarchod randi ka beta..Tera baap Mera Lund chusta he bhosdike

Dxr_Xrd:Chal, fake id fake id chillaraha hai, chal fake id hai, tera baap ka kya jata hai? Tere baap ka id hai? huh? Banchod. Oops, tere to hazar baap hai, considering ke to ek gali ke randi ke alut hai. Lawra, jab har jata hai sala, tab sab fake id ban jata hai. Pandu sala.
7mth
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Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcAuthor

Here I am with the usual 5 star review. Let me know if you have any questions or something that needed fixing. Keep an eye out for the public polls. Have a great day.

1yr

AlienWarlord
AlienWarlordLv5

I need to ask... which horrible fanfic scarred you so much that you had to put [No Scat] in the summary? I have to know. Because I feel like most people don’t expect that to be in any fanfic.

1yr
Binge_Reader69
Binge_Reader69Lv1

the author tries way too hard, every sentence us filled with unnecessary big/complicated words and the descriptions end up take massive parts of the chapters, its not a bad story its just a chore to read and gets boring very quickly with how rigid the conversations are

1yr
Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

heroines are not Virgins.................

1yr
Svr_Daoist
Svr_DaoistLv2

Nice read so far. I don't mind the slow burn, but my only complaint is to make MC fight someone or at least show him using his powers. It would be fun to see.

1yr
Sergio_Navarrete
Sergio_NavarreteLv3

Pretty good start. Keep it up author!

1yr
ValentineSnacks
ValentineSnacksLv3

To be honest I came in with low expectations for a marvel fanfic but was pleasantly surprised. The writing and character of the Mc is really well done. Even if it’s not my type of work to read, I still enjoyed it.

1yr
GamerFTW
GamerFTWLv4

personally anyone that's reincarnated into another persons body would train especially since ur in Marvel the Mc just seem naive and just trusts the authorities way too much

1yr
LuciferMorningStar
LuciferMorningStarLv14

It's really well written. Not much, if any, grammatical errors. I put a 4 on character design because the acceptance of polyamory/harem was forced(?) or not explained. It just kinda happened. I'm gonna chalk it up to insecurities that the women have been shown to have and the fact that it doesn't seem like they've put labels on the relationship. Keep up the good work.

1yr
Rainbow666666
Rainbow666666Lv15

Was a good read and I enjoyed every second of it. Would recommend 10/10

12mth
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