The writing quality, story development and character design is all right, I can't go into too much detail due to there being only a single chapter. The writing is ok, I haven't checked if the author has any other works or if its their first but its ok and easy enough to read(4/5). The story is progressing a little too fast for me personally and I generally enjoy a somewhat quickly paced story(4/5). The main character's reaction to randomly becoming Kaguya is a bit unbelievable but its easy to ignore(4/5). I'm unable to really discuss the Updating stability and World background because of the fact that there is only one chapter so ill just give (5/5) for both.Hey author this is my first time doing a review, probably shouldve waited for more chapters but I've never seen someone actually continue a Kaguya story before, and I'm hoping my review gives you some encouragement to continue. I'll be around and waiting for more chapters.
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