Item: I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain
Rating: 4.6
Author: RavenCorella

RavenCorellaLv111yr

2023-07-24 04:47

I low-key hated it. Definitely as far from my preferences as it could get. Even so, it objectively deserves close to 5 stars, something that surprised even me. The writing was excellent and the premise unique, to say the least. ) There are a few sparse punctuation issues, but other than that, gramamr is good. The prologue could use a bit of a rework, and will hurt your retention quite a bit at this pace. I'm not sure I have any concrete advice, but it doesn't feel important until you read chapter 2. Almost hypocritical of me, I know. But yes, prologue is only good in retrospect. When reading it, it seems bland. For your chapters, I think you need to either do 1,2k x 2 daily releases, or 1,5k single releases to qualify for their extra income. Should consider adjusting accordingly in the future. In conclusion, it's a great novel for those who enjoy this category. If you're into that, it's an excellent find. Good luck.

I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain

NewbieJimjim

4.7

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Liked by 4 people

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NewbieJimjimAuthor

Thanks for you honest review! I hope you could enjoy this genre more lol 😂

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RavenCorellaLv11

I'd rather eat its print out. >:]

NewbieJimjim:Thanks for you honest review! I hope you could enjoy this genre more lol 😂

1yr

NewbieJimjimAuthor

Then I will print it for you 😂😂😂😂

RavenCorella:I'd rather eat its print out. >:]

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