You should rename it as MHA in Marvel. (it went downhill After he renamed himself as shigaraki and you didn't build his outburst with his parents it all came suddenly, if you made some build up it could have been better) (I advice to make a MHA fanfic if you are a huge fan because a lot of people find Marvel complicated or it has too many timeline's to chose from, so i advice you as a new writer to take your comfort in writing and don't rush anything, I gave 3 stars because the story honestly isn't for me, it has a lot of MHA elements in it and I wanted to watch it just for the *mutants* and *one for all*) sorry for the broken review but its 4 am at the moment and I am sleepy, so i wanted to write this broken review before I sleep.
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