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TsukasaFrier
TsukasaFrierLv31yr
2023-07-29 22:23

I rarely read this type of story but after reading for 10 chapters, I think the story progress well and interesting. Although the writing may have little issue but it won't affect my joy to read the book. To Author.: English also not my first language, I truly understand your feeling. But you have a good story! Please keep up your work!

Spirit Of The White Lotus

huiyin_ing
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166 Chs

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Bloom07
Bloom07Lv3

Although I don't read a lot of novel with female lead, but I liked the way how you portrayed the innocence of a young child. No matter what anyone says, your writing is absolutely fine. It's easy to understand and you can instantly connect with the story. Overall a great read, I'd definitely suggest it to the people who loves reading female lead stories. Keep writing 🪶

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Quwalasto
QuwalastoLv11

This was a heavy read. Starting with how the main character lost everything before even opening her eyes to the world makes me feel despair and worry for her future. It got me engaged, hence why reading through it felt like a breeze! The emotions, family hatred, loss of loved ones, forced marriages, and politics all weave together a captivating narrative. If there's one thing I'd like to see more of, it is how the step siblings were raised and their unique perspective on the main character. But otherwise, I can't wait to see how the story unfolds!

1yr
Aidan_Grey
Aidan_GreyLv2

Its my first reading a female lead novel and it did not disappoint it is well written good job. I actually enjoyed it keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍

1yr
BlueJeans
BlueJeansLv3

This is an early review. I read a lot of historical story with FL protagonist. This book started with a heavy emotion as the protagonist was cursed by his own father. Its feel heavy to read because the emotion is on point. It is really unfair fate for the protagonist to have such a pitiful life upon her birth.The overall story is really good as you could understand many scenes with ease. The thing that makes me a bit off might be the future ML. I don't like the type ML that harsh at first then became fall in love. You know, its like something that I used to read but no Karma happening for the ML past action.When it comes to a protagonist that I loved, I always want her to have the best of the best partner. I hope there would be an option for the ML for romantic choices.

1yr
Crown_Nyx
Crown_NyxLv13

The story is not my cup of tea, but it's interesting for those who like the genre. The writing could be improved a bit, but considering the author's English is not their main language, you have leeway. I suggest editing the chapters and checking for small mistakes. Overall, if polished, it will be a nice story.

1yr
Trinit33
Trinit33Lv2

This is a very interesting book and I like how the character building is, I rezlly sympathize with the female-lead and this is an amazing book.

1yr
coco1193
coco1193Lv1

This story is interesting and engaging. There's definitely potential for improvement, but the narrative itself is genuinely sweet, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Keep up the great work, author!

1yr
gale200588
gale200588Lv13

the gramma used is easy to understand and the plot seems nice for those interested in this genre, I don't usually read these types of books so I don't know about it's uniqueness but if I get in the mood, I definitely could binge some chapters, update could use some work tho

1yr
empressblackrose09
empressblackrose09Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
MIMI24
MIMI24Lv3

First, the writing is smooth with a bit editing, it will be great. Just add (.) at the end of the dialogue and end it with ("). The story development is quite confusing. What the fl wants was to discover the truth about herself (if I'm not wrong), but I didn't find this feeling of the character. The prologue is good, but the next chapters are rushed. Adjust the synopsis according to the story. The characters need to be fleshed more. Give them ambitions and let them try to achieve it. Express their feeling in more sentences, don't rush to another's pov fast. It will be hard to track who is the one talking. The world background needs more improvement. The setting is a Chinese Empire, so try to stick to it. (I knew it's hard) The marriage vows? Did it exist? All the best.

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