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DaoistKwoeski
DaoistKwoeskiLv11yr
2023-07-07 15:29

Amithaba[img=recommend] this story got what it takes to land in the big leagues, but what's captured my attention was the characters they are fleshed out, they are not one dimensional specially the Mc, he feel like as a real person that's just how good the writing is we need more[img=update]

The Magus: Echoes of the forgotten

Gulban
5.0
10 Chs

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Gulban
GulbanAuthor

Thank you for pointing that out. I believe in creating multi-dimensional characters that feel real, as opposed to one-dimensional figures. It's important to me to capture the essence of humanity in my writing, where characters have depth and complexity. *cough *cough most of the time that is ;)

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Gulban
GulbanAuthor

Since I noticed that many authors tend to give their own novels 5 stars, I figured why not follow suit and do the same for mine. So, let's give it a solid 5 stars! But joking aside, I truly value constructive criticism for my book. If you could take the time to share your thoughts on my grammar, structure, or anything else that could use improvement, I'd genuinely appreciate it.

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queenmero
queenmeroLv1

It's better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. It's not immersive at all but potential wise it got some.

1yr
Kekei
KekeiLv3

Nice remake, with the grammar issue solved and the story line getting solid it's no longer just potential , it's going somewhere and i like where it's going, much 🥰 author.

1yr
Balvan
BalvanLv2

I thought I was trippin looking at this book cover with almost no view and rates, anyway it seems you have made some changes to the book author San, raaaah

1yr
Truth_seekers
Truth_seekersLv2

I see you made some changes here and there author-nim, truthfully speaking this way better than the first 🥇 this is what i call a change😎. At first i only gave it a review because author-nim was humble, but the grammar was childish, sorry if i offended you author-nim 😭😭😭 but i had to say it and i am proud to say your grammar had a dramatic change keep it up author-nim.

1yr
DaoistMoonx
DaoistMoonxLv1

The story is pretty good so far. It's too early to judge the book, but so far i can only judge it based on what it currently got, it's full of potential, if anyone is interested in reading mystery and magic type this is it for you.

1yr
Aidan_Grey
Aidan_GreyLv2

I think, "The Magus: Echoes of the Forgotten" is a fantastic web novel that is sure to delight fans of the fantasy genre. With its rich world-building, engaging characters, and thrilling plot, it's a must-read for anyone looking for a new and exciting adventure.

1yr
Zedong
ZedongLv1

You can't tell me the author doesn't have a dark humor, man really said bang new beginning after killing off the Mc just like that💀 still investing early😁

1yr
Fujin_fa
Fujin_faLv1

We got ourselves a new gem 😍 by the looks of it it won't dissapoint by the way hagar is just like me fr fr😋😋😋 keep it coming [img=update]

1yr
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