I love the story’s idea but the execution was subpar. So far the mc has not acted like as someone of his rank and provides no explanation to his ai or crew how he knows what he knows and why he is doing what he is doing(im suprised no one tried to mutany because the mc looks like an insane clone from their perspective). The mc is also hellbent on recruiting and powering up people he does not need (like peggy carter or the black widows or steve) or in some cases should not recruit since they try to betray or hurt him on the flip of a dime(peggy has shown she would have no problem betraying the mc if he does not align with their moral compass) in one chapter the main character gets attacked by captain marvel and thor because fury is too paranoid to hand over the tesseract after the mc explains that it would be safer with him after he clearly lost it to loki and does not understand what it does. Even after getting attacked by the top three heros in the mcu because of fury mc still tries to recruit him after all of that. the recruiting would be understandable if he did not have the entire crew of the unsc infinity and most probably some frozen spartans in there (if not he has shown to have the resources to have the spartan IV procedure done to people. Why not power up your loyal crew instead of hiring people that are likely to betray you). lastly the author has an annoying tendency to abbreviate words like through and though to thru and tho which breaks the immersion of the story and therefore making the story a chore to read. Thankfully other than those two issues listed above there are little to no grammar problems. For now I will try to continue reading and may change my review based on what happens
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