Item: Her Romeo's World
Rating: 4.8
Author: Rana_Chim_Chim

Rana_Chim_ChimLv31yr

2023-07-11 00:29

These are my honest review: 1) Cover - the image is good, but the title font and placement, maybe can be be enhanced more 2) Synopsis - i found it decently good as well 3) Prose - simple, easy to understand. So, it gives benefit to those readers who r not from english background 4) World building - SUPERB - when i read, i can picture every details you mentioned. This is not something easily done. GREAT JOB! 5) Character design - GREAT - love how you bring the character and their behavious, compelling with the storyline 6) Story development - INTERESTING - i love how u wrote the plot movement in a detailed manner, unlike other novel that rush the transmigration from one world to another. You nailed this one... the confusion... the plot... how the MC thinks... its PERFECT 7) Spelling and punctuation - really need a lot of improvement on this. Search the resources on the internet and amend it coz it helps in putting your readers in mood while reading your book. After all, this is about writing. Overall, I see a great potential in you and know you can do well in this! Goodluck!

Her Romeo's World

Cristabelxx

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CristabelxxAuthor

Thank you so much for your honest, yet beautiful review. Corrections noted! I hope I do better 🙏 Thanks a lot!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ I appreciate this.

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