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The_8th_king
The_8th_kingLv1411mth
2023-12-18 07:07

The concept of the novel is good and the personality of the mc aswell although i can see that you are starting to stray away from the character originally personalities, anyway the formal poetry like writing style of this novel is starting to really become unbearable like its just too constant even in normal conversations, sometimes i get so confused 😐 and it’s just sad to me because I really enjoyed this novel and i was happy when you started releasing chapters again, anyways i hope you take my feedback into consideration and just keep the poetry like writing for special occasions like when he achieves enlightenment or something like that

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