Review Detail of Kenrio in Naruto : The Flow Artist
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First chapter alone start with a huge plot hole showing how much thought auhtor really put into this. Robbers try to steal from a ANIME store this don't even make sense why woul somoene do that, and worst these robber have guns in a country where no even the police have guns, by this first chapter alone you can see how brainless this fic is
Naruto : The Flow Artist
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I am the Author here, if guns are allowed in japan it means allowed, no need to be mad and degrade my ff just because of a f-in single paragraph out of many and 68 chapters with more than one hundred thousand words. also, next time learn to calm down, read all the chapters, understand the plot and the characters better, focus on any improvements that were made throughout the chapters, rules of how to construct a logical and based criticism and not just spread around 3rd rate atheistic type of comment, and then after what you learnt, you can come back here and write your nonsense !