Review Detail of Humbuub in Naruto : The Flow Artist { On Hiatus }

The writing clearly needs more work, the structure is incoherent and the POV change in almost every page made the story flow choppy. I can't really take the story and seriously so I'm gonna read it as a parody, that make the story more tolerable in my mind. The updates are fast so that's a plus. World Background is AU, it's still at the start so I'll rate it 4 stars at the moment.