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Violet_Peaches
Violet_PeachesLv101yr
2023-07-22 15:13

So much potential, this is my early review tho: 1. MC progression is very interesting. 2. Supporting Characters have in-depth development, which is a plus ;) 3. The World Building is slowly unfolding, and getting into that typical Eastern Fantasy setting. 4. The Battle scene came as a surprise. another plus ;) 5. The MC isnt the typical OP/Cheat/Broken Character. a BIG plus! Expectations: Ill just say that I have so much hope for this novel to succeed! the potential is there and the writing could be tweaked, but all in all, Im looking forward to where the author takes the novel to Thank you for the chapters!

From Here to Eternity

Sage_Kong
4.8
33 Chs

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Chachichacha
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This is a good read! Keep up the good writing!

1yr

FrankensReader
FrankensReaderLv1

I have to say as a first review... This is interesting, I hope other readers would take in the consideration of reading this work. The story pacing is interestingly slow, and its not bad since you're slowly introducing the story and the world. I never review a novel, but by far, this is the best story I have come across. Keep up the good work. and update more! The wait is killing me.

1yr
TP_95
TP_95Lv1

I like how detailed the author comes up with plot lines, and am excited at how he would weave everything together. since the author had been setting bonus chapters up for the supporting characters like Notos and Leia. Also, Archilles also has his own plot to weave. All in all, this is a jewel in a rough, as of now. For now, ill keep it in my library and will be reading it once it progressed to a few hundred chapters.

1yr
Dr_Chen
Dr_ChenLv1

So far, the development of the characters is great. The story takes you on a rollercoaster ride of excitement and sadness, it is a mixture of elements that keeps the readers thrilled about what's going to happen next. I suggest others to read this novel once it has lots of chapters, tho :)

1yr
Kadar_Omar
Kadar_OmarLv3

Will the mc keep his current personality or will he change to become like fang yuan or the mc of soul land

1yr
Bread_marshmallow
Bread_marshmallowLv1

I can say those spare minutes even hours of reading was put into good use, revealing how each character was well developed and a exciting, well organized story. I'd love to read more about your story...please write more.

1yr
Yunich_Lorens
Yunich_LorensLv1

The story's pacing is alright, if you're looking for an MC that doesn't have the usual plot armors then, this is for you. Excellent Character development and World building. The Story Development style is one to be applauded. overall, the story has very high ceiling and potential.

1yr
BangsBunny
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amazing quality, story is written with deep concivtion

1yr
PlumLeaf93
PlumLeaf93Lv1

I love how the story develops, I have high hopes towards the novel and I can clearly see the potential of it. It could be something special. I just hope that the author doesn't drop another good story this time.

1yr
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