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2024-05-18 19:58

hmmmm😒am very disappointed at first i read the reviews and most of them are good so gave this book a chance. But the way the characters are developed is a NO for me. i kept reading telling myself that it will get better but I got fed up. The FL and ML are annoying they all grown up portrayed as smart people but I find them stupid because of their misunderstanding all the time like teenagers . The FL is portrayed as someone mysterious and very smart but up to 100 chapters that i have read there is no major development in her character. The scheming is too much yet the pay back is slow and not satisfying. The MLS' s secretary some times refers the FL as " my wife or our wife" like what the heck am I reading. please dear author am not trying to be rude but next time please do more research and portray your lead characters well it's what drives the plot.

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