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It’s been a while I’ve given a book 5 stars😅 that says a lot. But onto the review! I love how nicely your writing style and use of grammar complements your mc’s persona so well. Often times, it can be hard to deliver emotions properly when writing in third-person pov, but you personalized it so well, that Kazuki’s voice as a character shone through perfectly! It was wasy to delve into the story and get sucked in, feeling things as he did. The only advice I’d give though, is that maybe you could emphasize more on Kazuki’s feelings about the betrayal he suffered. Like the other side of the revenge he’s fueled by. The hurt. The people who betrayed him must have been people he once trusted, so maybe show a bit about the hurt he feels about that. I feel like that’ll invoke even more sympathy and mutual anger in your readers! All in all, this was a fantastic read!

This is my first time reading an actual novel on this app, and I have to say it has been a great experience so far. Let me begin listing my thoughts: Writing Quality: 5 Stars. The descriptions are vivid and well-written, without being overly informative or relying on excessive info-dumping. Punctuation and grammar mistakes are not present. Updating Stability: 5 Stars. Although I have recently started reading this, I don't find the updating schedule to be bad at all. Creating a world from scratch with unique characters and constantly building upon it is a difficult task, and I have great respect for it. Therefore, it would make sense if the updating schedule was occasionally irregular. Story Development: 5 Stars. I personally find the story very interesting. People's opinions may differ, and I'm not sure how others would respond to the developments, but I highly recommend giving this novel a try, even though the subject matter may seem clichéd. Character Design: 5 Stars. The main character, in my opinion, is very well-crafted. He is portrayed as intelligent, honorable, loyal, strong, and possesses qualities of an anti-hero. Writing Background: 5 Stars. As I mentioned before, novel writers who can create story settings and power systems rom scratch or draw inspiration and make it work deserve an immediate 5-star rating from me. Overall, I give this novel a 5/5 review. Everyone has different opinions, so there may be people who disagree.

After I read a couple of chapters in this book, I must say that the storytelling and plot are quite refreshing for this platform. The narrative is good and detailed. However, as I said, A full plot setting in Edo period Japan is quite a niche for web novel platforms and might be hard to attract the readers. still, I hope your work gets more attention that you deserve, and keep up the good work

First of all, how is it so relatable when it's not even me there? Second of all the descriptive language is just chef's kiss and it's not perfect, it's way beyond it. Sometimes I get chills while imagining the scene and the way you handled your main character Kazuki is brilliant. He is extremely relatable not extremely evil nor extremely good, he is like a normal person craving for vengeance. Also, my favorite magic is shadows and darkness while I also like samurai so I can safely say I loved it. There is also a nice blend of history and fantasy which doesn't overlap each other.

Highly recommended, writing is 10/10, plotline is intresting 10/10, story development is steady, not too fast not to slow 10/10, overall an amazing book!

I’ve never read a book about the Edo period and I’m enjoying learning

Sekiro, Shadows Die Thrice ) This deserves a rare 5 stars from me. Stability would normally be lower, but if it comes at a cost of your spectacullar writing, I'd rather wait. I couldn't bring myself to nitpick anything in particular. The pacing was a bit on the lower end, with one fight stretching multiple chapters, but that's a style in of itself. I loved it, Look forward to 100 chapters so I can binge. Good luck.

From where I can tell for the chapters that I have read, this is a pretty good story. The first three parts/ chapters are a good way to set up the story. Although some parts brought out confusion, it is overall a good story.It did seem as if it was going to lose its way in the next 3 parts, but perhaps there is some plan for the story's trajectory.It is written rather well for the most part. The main character is engaging in the first three chapters, so hopefully, things will only go up from there. I will continue reading and reply a second review once that is completed.

To begin, let me point out that you better bring your dictionary beside you. The author definitely pulled all the stops with his/her grand vocabulary! Well, jokes aside, it was a very engaging read from the first few chapters! Nice work, Author❤️