~Warning ⚠️ This is my first time making a review.~(currently at ch 23 >Writing quality It is not good, but it is not bad, there are some inconsistencies in some of the sentences but it is bearable👍. >Updating stability It is great 😁the author posts every day so there is nothing to complain about. >Story development It was okay in the beginning but after the first selection, the MC turned into Isagi with a system with the same losses, and everything. >Character design The character is good 👍 the author includes their personality to life in some chapters 👌. >World background The background is okay we know almost nothing about Mc’s life but this might change in the future. >Overall The story has potential if the author edits his chapters and diverges from the plot and stops making the mc Isagi the story will be great. ( I am by no means a professional and am just commenting from personal experience )
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