Well first time writing a fanfic, just here to give it a try. I initially wanted to write a OPM fanfic but here we are. I decided to improve my writing skills before truly being invested in a fanfic.So, don't expect much, also it can be dropped anytime, as I said, I am writing it because I am somewhat bored. Though there are a lot mistakes, some which I ignored because I was to lazy to care. But if you find any consistent mistakes you can point it out in the comments. I will probably not reply to your comments because I am the dude in the group chat who sees everything but never types anything back.

I have not read the novel. I'm commenting because I've seen some cruel comments. Unfortunately, some people don't care that this is your first novel. Remember that you can do better in the future.

this is so good . kerp up the good work.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Keep up the good work.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is the most amateurish writing i have ever read. Mistakes, stupidity, lack of dialogue, wasting of the reader's time. It has it all.

I hope you don't drop this it has potential (for me that is) ........................................................ ...... ................

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