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2023-08-13 05:15

This is an early review, but overall, i think the novel's pretty good, you can tell the author has put in a lot of work into this to make it stand out, and it certainly does. The writing style is light hearted and really easy to read, so i think with just a bit of editing, this could become much better.

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Thank you, I will certainly and kmprove the chapters. I'm glad you enjoyed it

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Synergistic
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50 Chapter Milestone So Good day Dinosaurs, I am the author (well duh) and I just want to share that I appreciate all your support and your comments regarding my mistakes and other helpful incites that allowed me to grow as an author and improve my writing. Present situation, I will be frank there will be days that I will not upload and there are days that I will, I hope and beg that you please understand if the situation arises to such a degree of upload lag between days. I am now experiencing the difficulties of life and I am preparing myself to move forward in the guise that I would overcome those trials in life. I will continue to improve my writing and will actually try various writing styles and see how I adjust to them and how I can incorporate them. Enough about me and my silly redundancies. Let us talk about the story. The 50th chapter will mark the ending of the first arc of the novel which would be about Arthas fighting off that creature, following in The next arc will be situated around the school. Which means School Arc! Expect this to be slow as I would incorporate a lot of school aspects to try and make it feel as natural as I can, There would be a lot of familiarities and some twists would be given. Furthermore, the story would only expand as new dinosaurs, and rivals might sprout from the ground and make things harder for our not-so-loving responsibility main character. As a final message, I ask that you be patient if the time comes that I have stopped uploading, however, I will say when I shall have difficulties for that particular day/week. Thank you Dinosaurs for all your support and suggestions.

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