hello its any_sirel, its my first work so I am nervous though hope you like it. if you liked the work even a little bit I hope you will like it to the library and spare some power stones which will help me get more readers like yourself you can comment questions ,suggestions and thoughts on the comments below chapter or paragraph comment and I will get to them as soon as I can. thank you for reading...

I like the style of the novel. The mixing of povs is an interesting trick, but you can get lost at the beginning of the story, but later you get used to it

So far it's looking pretty good, a typical reincarnation story I'm looking forward to how the characters get fleshed out in the future chapters and the MC's past too

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good I like The story , it's pace is comfortable, looking forward to more chapters

This is an awesome story, the writer has a unique way of mixing in both 3rd person and 1st person POV. That's a rare ability, and of course the descriptions are wonderfully made out, it gives a perfect picture. Hope there's more of this cause I'm still reading in.

So far so the story is really interesting. I like the fun interactions with the system too. MC's growth seems promising and of course there's always room for improvement, world background is really good too. All in all, it's a good read. Keep writing, Author!

I am new to this genre but I like how the MC is progressing through the story. I also like the fun interactions with the system. Usually, the AI is dull but in this book, MC's dialogues with the system are quite interesting.

I really enjoyed reading it, especially with the recent development of the new chapters. I can't wait for the new updates

I like what the story means and represents but a lot of room for improvement! the story is very good so keep that up but you need more details and specifics!!. keep trying I know you can make this book even better!!. good book!! :)