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2024-08-17 03:54

HONEST REVIEW!! Let me say this fic is a decent read if you think Of it as a pass the time book. The mc isn’t as crazy as I thought him to be based on his character profile and turns out to be somewhat decent guy with flaws that work for him. And he stays like that while also growing, Slowly, but growing. CONS: the simulation system somewhat destroys any fun from the worlds he visits but at the same time makes you want to continue reading to see where he changes things. However the biggest problem is that the simulation worlds feels like filler and the mc breezes through some for no reason other than rewards. Another issue is the power system it’s horrendous. While the mc keeps some powers he rarely uses most of them to the point where it feels like he doesn’t have them. Another thing is the Evolution part of skills makes it really confusing to keep up with everything. then when the mc is finally Strong the author introduces the Omniverse War which further complicates things and makes the mc seem exstreamly weak. THE WORST THING FOR ME: the worst thing is the amount of time the mc is in simulation worlds instead of his own. 60-70 chapters in and it feels like he has been in his own world for no more than 1-week and the most he has done is have a basketball game and reunite with his childhood friend. That’s it the rest he is in simulations sometimes doing nothing and getting rewards. OVERALL: I don’t hate it nor like this fic it’s good to pass the time but that’s it

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