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Briar_Rosier_
Briar_Rosier_Lv134mth
2024-11-13 16:44

It starts off mostly good, but after a while it starts just telling you what’s happening, not showing. As a result, it becomes extremely monotonous to read, along with boring, since there’s less engaging details. Usually books do the opposite, as new writers get better as time goes on, so my guess is the author got bored and is continuing for contract/money reasons while putting in less effort.

Restart: The World Savior's New Beginning

_OMNiCiENT_
4.7
673 Chs

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_OMNiCiENT_
_OMNiCiENT_Author

Absolutely not. Among all the book that I write this one is my favourite as I really like Elena. As for the chapters that one might find boring I think I wrote them when I was busy or on vacation so I had very little time. Sorry about that as daily uploads does create this problem sometime for me. I will appreciate if you can tell which arcs were boring to you.

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_OMNiCiENT_
_OMNiCiENT_Author

Oh and for the description part, I think I have always described it from the third persons perspective but I can feel how that might be a bit weird. Thanks for reading my love though. (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

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FU_HUA
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is this going to have romance if so please a yuri,not fan of straight romance if the mc is female

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PSR_Invincible
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I am a big fan of female MC. I am big fan of Overpowered MC. I'm also a big fan of fantasy rpg type stories. So, everything in this novel is something I enjoy. I am really loving this. Please upload more chapters as I can not wait for more.

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Hell_Chaos_Nether
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I am very big fan of OP protagonist. Here the protagonist does look very strong. I want to see her decimate opponent. It will be very fun to see her doing that. I want more and more chapters. And can you write in 3rd person POV instead of st person. It feels weird somehow. Please upload faster. Thank you...

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_Omniscient
_OmniscientLv1

I'm enjoying the novel so far. Keep up the good work. I hope that Elena's adventurers starts very soon. I'm looking forward to it. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

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Blazing_Passion
Blazing_PassionLv1

I'm really enjoying the novel. I want more novel with female protagonist. I am really looking forward to Elena's future development. The characters introduced so far are interesting.

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Reyviel_Faesly
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YESSSSS! FINALLY! A novel with a female lead with No Yuri 😭 I appreciate your steadfast heart and mind for not being moved by the horniness of this App. It's a great novel and I would highly recommend you read it. ✨

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Peaceful_Sky_God
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The starting is looking good. Can't wait for the start of her adventure. I am really enjoying the female MC. I really need more chapters. I still can not judge the novel as I don't have enough content. I always like OP character and she is looking hella strong. Please continue wrong the novel.

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Grand_Dao_Ancestor
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I like how the protagonist doesn't always defend everyone. I like ruthless characters a lot but sometimes the protagonists are comically ruthless which I hate. But here she had perfect balance between ruthlessness and generosity. The update efficiency is also very good. I will like to see more about this world and Elena's past world. So please keep up the good work.

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Mystic_Phantom
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I just started reading this story not expecting much as most of the stories with female MC became very bland over time. But I glad after reading till chapter 40. I like the MC a lot. Other characters of the stoty are also very well written. I'm looking forward to the world building too.

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P_S_R
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This is getting amazing. It have a very comfy pace to it. Please keep this up. I'm really enjoying it so much. This is very awesome. 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰

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