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UnspokenBeauty
UnspokenBeautyLv151yr
2023-10-08 01:42

Ill be honest this story irritated me to no end. The female lead doesn’t speak up for herself, she cries all the time, its beyond annoying. I hope she grows a little more in development , but i skipped a few chapters cause i couldn’t stand the “please let me go! Im begging you!” Comment every few chapters from her. For goodness sake

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how will she speak up....she is malnourished,so any one can physical harm her easily,she won't even have strength to save herself...she has weakness in form of her son n brother who she wants to protect ,her one statement can put their life in danger n make her helpless...she is poor n has no means to earn ....look what happened to her brother ,he can't even find a decent job because of how the powerful r not letting him get hired ....how is she supposed to stand for herself when there r people who want to tarnish her wherever they meet ... expecting her to be strong female lead is as good as asking n handicap person to win a marathon ...I love a strong female lead but here circumstances is dead against her to be one n that's a journey we have to watch how she improves in future .....though she won't be strong as the level of strong we like but little improvement will also be a success ...when ur core is weakened it's very difficult to grow...only future will tell how much she improves ....in this case she does need an external support

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