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2023-07-07 07:01

I really wanted it to be good, but it's unfortunately not the story is only driven by plot armor, for example, the Mc gets a trial where he has to get a holocron that sith lords have been trying to get for thousands of years and just so happens to find the way to get it another example is when he has to get a map that you need information that he just so happens to get told just a second before he leaves to go get it and surprise surprise sith masters have been looking to get this map for thousands of years and he just so happens to get the information on how just in the nick of time so convenient not to mention the dissapointmant I felt when Darth Malek took interest in him took him to korroban to be trained only to have him become the apprentice to some 3rd rate sith lord(talk about blue balling) who expects her apprentice candadets to be able to get holocrons and maps that sith masters couldn't get after thousands of years of trying.

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